3.4.06
6:54 PM
POEM
Hey hey,
check this out..a poem i wrote,ofcourse with mummy's editing!! :)
Its for english..guess wht my holiday homework is?? compiling about 8-10 poems (all self written),into a book...
HAAIIIYYYOOOOHHH!!!!! :) should be fun i reckon!! hahaha!!! yea right!!!!!!!!!
You hung there,
With blood flowing out of Your sides,
They had beaten You beyond recognition,
Your flesh torn and ripped,
Like hungry men,they attacked You as game,
Relishing in the taste of blood on their hands,
How they ridiculed You,
How they laughed at You and mocked You,
They pierced your sides,and wounded You,
With evil intent,they nailed You onto that cross,
Without reason or rhyme,
They left You hanging there in shame.
Rejected and forsaken,Yet You said,
"Father forgive them,
They know not what they do",
For mankind to be saved,
Rescued from eternal condemnation,
Can this be true?
Your actions is but proof,
You hung there...
With blood flowing from Your sides,
Your actions, proof of Your love,
Forgive me, Father,
If ever I doubted truth.
So,leave your comments okie??!! ahahha!! :) :) :)
well,now gotta get back to doing homework!!
two essays yet to be done...
Religion studies project yet to be done...
Dear God,help me!!!!!!!!! ;) ;)
-END-
niCcima
4 Comments:
See ive read your poem very thought provoking.
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Anonymous, at
April 03, 2006
very nice.... you sure you wrote it.. ? hahah no la.. good job woman....! muah muah muah!
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Kristy Tan, at
April 04, 2006
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saran, at
April 05, 2006
Hey nicci...just came across your blog today...happy to read at least all the updates. Was in KL last week then went to your hse where anand is staying currently...phew..words cannot express how I miss you all. Visited FGA and it was not like before. I miss your father loud voice..and you all too...my hugs and regard to your parent, kelsey, ryan, misha and YOU too.
Lots of love
Sharron pudun
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saran, at
April 05, 2006
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